WHY IS IT?

Why is it that:

1) Everytime my workload slows down, I try to hunt down new jobs, and then people who have kept me on hold suddenly flood in like a tidal wave?

2) I hurry to meet my client's deadline, and when I email to let the client know I've completed the assignment, the client takes his time getting back to me.

3) Ten people need me at once, or nobody needs me.

4) As soon as I get on the phone with an author, another author needs to reach me.

5) When I'm on a tight deadline, my email is not working or my phone is not working.

6) When we're almost ready to go to press, my production manager's computer crashes and important files for the book are lost.

7) I sometimes feel as if I'm the only one experiencing bad luck!

Patriot Ledger Window Dressing Column Feature

WOMEN’S WARNINGS: Two local
authors offer advice on spotting unscrupulous
book publishers and dishonest financial
advisers. Abington author and editor Donna
J. Erickson has written “No-Hassle Publishing:
An Author’s Guide to Today’s Changing
Industry” (2010, A Flair For Writing, 29
pages, $9.95 from Amazon and Aflairforwriting.
com). Certified financial planner Bonnie
Kirchner of Marion has penned “Who Can
You Trust With Your Money?” (2010, FT
Press, 224 pages, $19.99 from Amazon,
Borders and Barnes & Noble.) Hint: it’s not
her ex-husband Brad Bleidt, the Boston
Ponzi schemer who is currently serving an
11-year prison sentence for stealing $30 million
from his investment clients.

Over The Top Award

Well, what do ya know...Author of the blog, Creative Chronicles, has awarded me with their "Over The Top Award," saying she likes the way I write. I'm tickled, touched, flattered, and thankful. Aw shucks.

Become a Better Business Writer

By Donna Erickson

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Every sentence you put down on paper (or on a computer screen) identifies who you are and/or what your business offers. Poor writing, grammatical errors, and typos all deflect from the professionalism you want to generate and the image you want to create. The following tips are meant to help guide you, so your writing is clean, crisp, and clear.

1. Use the active rather than passive voice. This steadfast rule for professional writing is especially important for authors of both fiction and non-fiction. However, the advice is good for all writers creating any form of narrative, copywriting, or web content. Voice shows whether the subject performs (active) or receives (passive) the action of the verb. Instead of saying, "The film was watched by a large audience, say, "A large audience viewed the film." The use of the active voice allows for a more direct and aggressive type of writing.

2. Avoid linking verbs. Rather than saying, "She was honest and genuine" you could say, "Her proven honesty made her even more genuine." Add more power to the punch by staying away from linking verbs, such as is, was, seemed, or had. As soon as you are tempted to begin a sentence with there is, it was, or he had (for example), try coming up with a new approach, such as the one above.

3. Try not to use the word very. In most cases, the sentence will sound better without it. Most likely, you'll notice if you decide to remove it, you won't miss it.

4. Limit the word that. Its overuse in today's writing is abundant. Example: see the last sentence, in number three above. I could have chosen to write: most likely, you'll notice that if you decide to remove it, you won't miss it. You can see the word is not necessary. By the way, I just created another sentence without that (in the previous sentence).

5. Write to the reader. If you are writing to sell, be sure to use the word you more than the word I or we. You want the reader to identify with what you are saying.

6. Stay away from cliches and colloquialisms. Experts recommend limiting the use of them. Occasional use is okay, but I have seen writers who tend to write every sentence that way. Some examples to avoid include: chill out, pissed off, as fate would have it, on top of the world, bored to death, etc.

7. Keep sentences short. Rather than writing a long, run-on sentence of connected phrases, chop it up. Cut it into several short sentences or use the em dash (see below), and you'll see the readability will improve.
If you follow these rules, your writing should improve dramatically. You may even get more business - *because you will be keeping the reader's attention instead of losing a sale.

*( use of em dash)

Donna Erickson
"Your Publishing Guru"
Owner, A Flair For Writing
http://www.aflairforwriting.com

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A testimonial from one of my discussion groups...

Donna Erickson
Senior Editor/Copartner at AG Press
Ryan has given you good advice. Double-check your proposal. You don't want any typo's. I happened to spot three in your posting. If you decide to have someone proof it, I can help. If you e-mail me privately, I can refer you to two small presses that won't charge--if you decide to go the traditional route and if they feel it is marketable. Good luck!

Best wishes,

Donna Erickson
donna@aflairforwriting.com
Posted 4 days ago | Delete comment
Ion Itescu
Experienced Book Seller, AdWords Marketer, Solid Background in Book Distribution, and Real Estate Investor
Both Ryan and Donna gave you good advice. You can also look into self publishing and POD. You left out the subject of your future book - the most important piece of info which almost always determines the route you need to take to being published.

Ion itescu
probizmanager@gmail.com
Posted 2 days ago | Reply Privately

Douglas Keeney
Founder at L. Douglas Keeney & Company, LLC
I don't know Donna E. but her point is so terribly important. Typos are deal killers. Typos are like finding a pebble in your pizza or bugs in a sandwich. Uch. Well, you have typos. You have typos in your question. You have typos in your LinkedIn Summary. Not good. But don't take any of this the wrong way. This comes from people who have been burned by their own mistakes. One of my books -- published by Wm.Morrow -- had a typo on the date of the attack on Pearl Harbor. We've been there. It kills your credibility as an author. Particularly on a pitch.

No typos. Get an agent. Or POD.

D
Posted 18 hours ago | Reply Privately

What You Need To Know About Publishing Today

A Guide To Today's Changing Face of Publishing

I don't know what's changing faster--technology or ways to get published. I've been the owner of a writing/editing service for 23 years. Within the past four years, I've gone from a local business, serving a regional clientele in my home office, to a virtual business servicing clients worldwide. Since 2007, I have been editing books, after being hired as an editor by a celebrity on-line. From there, I was contracted with a publishing company as Senior Editor/Copartner. I have edited five, published books available in online bookstores. This has been an exciting year for me. My previous Who's Who listings were Who's Who in America and Who's Who of American Women. This year I am included in Who's Who in the World, so I know my influence has become global. I have clients in the UK and Ireland, as well as throughout the United States. I also got involved with a reality television show this year. I am a Production Consultant/YouTube Judge for The Write Stuff--to be aired on the CW Network-- which will reward the next best-selling author with a book deal and other literary prizes. All of this exposure has given me a great deal of enjoyment, but it is also a lot of hard work.

I am hearing over and over again that new authors want to know how to go about getting published. I have the answers. I am putting together a booklet which will soon be available on my website www.aflairforwriting.com. My comprehensive guide for the aspiring or novice writer will help them avoid pitfalls in the industry. I have worked for a publisher for over a year now, and, in that short amount of time, I have gained enough knowledge-- about this ever-changing industry--to write volumes.

You'll be hearing a lot more from me. I want to help authors understand exactly what their options are, what is the best way to go about getting published, and what to expect. More and more individuals are making the decision to write a book, now that self-publishing makes it quick and easy. But there's a lot they don't know ,and I am here to educate them. I will explain what to do and not do. I have seen too many people learn the hard way, after they have invested time and money, to later question whether they have taken the right steps. My comprehensive guide will help direct "wannabes" in the right direction and untangle the messy confusion of possibilities available today.

What You Need To Know About Publishing Today

A Guide To Today's Changing Face of Publishing

I don't know what's changing faster--technology or ways to get published. I've been the owner of a writing/editing service for 23 years. Within the past four years, I've gone from a local business, serving a regional clientele in my home office, to a virtual business servicing clients worldwide. Since 2007, I have been editing books, after being hired as an editor by a celebrity on-line. From there, I was contracted with a publishing company as Senior Editor/Copartner. I have edited five, published books available in online bookstores. This has been an exciting year for me. My previous Who's Who listings were Who's Who in America and Who's Who of American Women. This year I am included in Who's Who in the World, so I know my influence has become global. I have clients in the UK and Ireland, as well as throughout the United States. I also got involved with a reality television show this year. I am a Production Consultant/YouTube Judge for The Write Stuff--to be aired on the CW Network-- which will reward the next best-selling offer with a book deal and other literary prizes. All of this exposure has given me a great deal of enjoyment, but it is also a lot of hard work.

I am hearing over and over again that new authors want to know how to go about getting published. I have the answers. I am putting together a booklet which will soon be available on my website, www.aflairforwriting.com. My comprehensive guide for the aspiring or novice writer will help them avoid pitfalls in the industry. I have worked for a publisher for over a year now, and, in that short amount of time, I have gained enough knowledge-- about this ever-changing industry--to write volumes.

You'll be hearing a lot more from me. I want to help authors understand exactly what their options are, what is the best way to go about getting published, and what to expect. More and more individuals are making the decision to write a book, now that self-publishing makes it quick and easy. But there's a lot they don't know, and I am here to educate them. I will explain what to do and not do. I have seen too many people learn the hard way, after they have invested time and money, to later question whether they have taken the right steps. My comprehensive guide will help direct "wannabes" in the right direction and untangle the messy confusion of possibilities available today.

A TYPICAL WORKDAY

Usually, my workday begins about 9 a.m. – sometimes earlier, sometimes later. That’s one of the things I like best about being my own boss. First, I check all of my e-mail and sort through what needs to be answered right away and what can be saved. I check the date for any deadlines that I have given to my clients or colleagues. If someone was supposed to get back to me (with revisions, payments, completed e-mail forms, etc.) and hasn’t, I follow up with a phone call and/or e-mail. Then I make any other phone calls that are necessary before beginning my work.

I’m usually writing or editing until about 1 p.m. From approximately 1:00 to 2:00, I’m busy with lunch, errands, exercise, or meditation. At about 2:00, I’ll answer saved e-mail, any new e-mail, and return phone calls. Then it’s back to writing/editing until about 4:30.

After making dinner and connecting with my family, I’ll be cleaning up, taking a walk (if I hadn’t gotten any fresh air that day), and talking on the phone to friends or family. I also try to read the newspaper. Between 7 and 8 p.m., I do a final e-mail check or some last minute editing.

As soon as a client requests a job, I create a file and open the account. All notes and information gets tossed into the folder and placed in my “Work In Progress” pile. From there, it moves to “Work Completed,” where I may be waiting for a reply, revisions, or payment. Once it is complete, it is stored and saved on a back-up disk.

I try to keep all of my work in progress prioritized. The folders are lined up, so I can see what needs my attention first. It’s also handy to have them nearby if a client calls, and I need to pull the file while we talk. Being organized definitely helps me get through each workday day with ease.

My Profile

Recently, I was selected to be profiled in the Patriot Ledger/Brockton Enterprise. The article appeared on December 2, 2008 in the Her Story section of the Womyn Zone pages.




Here's the link to my profile:

: http://www.patriotledger.com/lifestyle/x596333871/HER-STORY-Donna-Erickson